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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
How did you the textures on the white part of her suit ? It looks very very nice^^
Glad you liked it!
hehe you are welcome^^
And I really love the background.
But the left leg has issues. It is shorter, smaller, and the shape of the outer thigh has something wrong with it that I just cannot define. It doesn't look right, but I couldn't tell you why.
Her jawline is also questionable, though at the angle you chose it is only noticeable because the underside of her nose is visible where the underside of her jaw is not. Either her jawline is scalloped on one side, or there is a trickery of lightplay going on that conceals this.
One last thing... she looks like she has a... um... boypart in there.
I don't mean to bring you down... just my artistic opinion. Other than those things, this looks very good. I like her hair, and the gun, and the posture of her upper body. (I also kinda like the outfit!) The background is also epic win, all the fuzzy haze and the contrasting blacks, reds and blues, but blending in the way that only clouds could. I once saw the sky look painted on, and I wondered if it weren't that instead, I had seen painted skies look real.
This is one of them.
Good work... very good work. Just needs some minor touch-ups, is all.
-AE
You're welcome. I do try to be helpful.
-AE