This is amazing! I admire both your art skills and determination to finish a project this big! Even if I were as good at art as you were I'd never have the patience to do something like this... this really made my day
I'm actually going to make a pass over every page when the project is complete to try and make sure all the pages are of the same quality. I think I may add some more darks and brights in Carter's visor to give more a reflective quality. I'll try not to ruin it!
This was actually my favourite page I think overall. Perhaps for an unexpected reason. It was the little detail of seeing Jun's eyes through the visor, that was just a winning little touch that added so much.
The art is fantastic. Love the colors, love the style. And I love the composition of the panels.
I only have one critique, and it's a nit that has more to do with the dialogue. There's something unsatisfying about "I need that bullet." It just sounds awkward. It might just be me, and I'd like to hear others' opinions, but I think I prefer a good strong, "Take the shot - Now!" or "Burn him - Now!" "I need that bullet," just took me out of the scene as a reader.
Also, I have a feeling that some of the blood would have ended up on her hair.
I definitely debated Carter's comment there. It was originally 'Take the shot' but then having Jun say "Just waiting for my shot" just felt like I was repeating 'shot' too much. On the other hand, 'Burn him' or something more violent felt out of character for Carter. I thought requesting the bullet itself wasn't something I heard before and sounded good. Sorry if it took you out of it. To answer your question, no one else has made any note of it in the comments here or where I originally posted it at halo.bungie.org.